Michael Walsh
ILP 6
February 25, 2012
The first news article I found for Essay Two comes from the
CDC, the United States Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, regarding
Unhealthy America. The overall message of the article is how eating in America is
still overall unhealthy. It analyzes the unhealthy tendencies that people in
every state in the United States have regarding exercise and food habits. It
also analyzes the statistical information of unhealthiness in America.
Therefore, in terms of stasis theory, it goes under the category of facts. The
subcategory of facts deals with how something happens, the facts associated
with it, the problem or issue and what are the causes and effects of the
problem and how it can be corrected. The article addresses the problem that is
how the general population is overweight or obese and it is leading to a large
number of preventable diseases. The problem is not just a lack of exercise but
unhealthy foods that promote weight gain. The article focuses on the aspect of
unhealthy foods and the general idea of an unhealthy lifestyle. Therefore, this
article by the CDC states that the cause of the problem is unhealthy or fatty
foods. This is one major supporting claims for my major thesis of unhealthy
America being a combination of unhealthy foods, lack of exercise and an overall
psychological impact of general unhealthiness. This claim in the article
reviews the overall effects that consuming unhealthy foods has on the general
health of people. This is a really important claim because it is a major aspect
of my paper to analyze the effects of these foods and the affect they have on the
America’s population. Thus, the article is going to be a key component of my
complete essay because the information provided is credible coming from the
CDC. The other primary claim I will use from this article deals with the policy
change for food in social settings. Therefore, it discusses plans that are
either in place or going to be soon implemented to address the situation and
promote healthier food options. For example food stores will offer more healthier
choice options and schools will place an importance on healthier options. These
new plans create the opportunity to turn back the time in a sense to work
towards a more fit and overall healthier American population. This article
stresses the importance of healthy foods and will play a key role in my research
for the essay because it deals with one major component of Unhealthy America,
the unhealthy foods the population consumes that leads to unhealthiness.
"Eating
in America Still Unhealthy: CDC." US News. U.S.News & World
Report, 29 Sept. 2009. Web. 24 Feb. 2013.
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